Antiphonal Pantoum on the Song of Songs
Seems like maybe this is the right day to post a draft from a series I’m writing, on and off, of riffs and variations on that ancient anthology of erotic poems. Also, an intriguing batch of interpretive links is here.
Canticle I
Unhinge, God, my lover’s mouth
and let him kiss me
with the kisses of his mouth
so I will forget wine.
And let her kiss me.
And her word is a balm.
So I will forget wine
made from sweet palms.
And his word is a calm
across my skin. Bittered
maid, sweetened by palms
that trace a small river
across my sin. Embittered
dark, my lover, comely, incensed,
she traces a small river,
the henna between her breasts.
In the dark, lover, come to me. Incense
a hundred jilted sons of others.
The henna between my breasts
spills and spells a true word.
A hundred jilted suns are mothers
nursing infants on light
that spills and spells a true word:
beloved. Beloved, tonight,
coursing, intent, so light
with the kisses of our mouths,
let unloved be loved. Tonight
unhinge, God, your lover’s mouth.